That won't work here, because the people we're trying to make sympathetic to you are 'the Foundation'. Or its agents at least. Painting them as the bad guy won't help.
We have to make it clear that a representative from the top is the one making this happen. That way the lower-ranked agents can feel sympathy, rather than defensive.
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We have to make it clear that a representative from the top is the one making this happen. That way the lower-ranked agents can feel sympathy, rather than defensive.